Green Eyes: A Poem of Unrequited Love
Your green eyes, your sweet green eyes,
Shining, defying, they beckon to me.
Your eyes, my sweet, sure demise,
Pull me into a deep, emerald sea.
Cascading in pale, perfect pieces,
Shards of jade endlessly swirl.
Like a leaf with small, curious creases,
Around bright, black voids, they curl.
Glowing, sparkling, your eyes laugh at me.
With annoyance, the green depths churn.
Softening, they betray sympathy,
But, O, how those pale eyes can burn.
With anger, leaves burst into flame;
Jet black lashes border like smoke.
Sharp jade edges are fast to blame.
Fault descends, a heavy, green yoke.
But through the jade depths, true love can shine.
At its light, all darkness will flee.
With my own eyes, I beg you, be mine.
For those looks are not meant for me.
Turning away, you greet your own love,
And you leave me without a goodbye.
Alone, I implore the skies above,
But cold grey never seems to reply.
I try to forget you with all of my might;
In my heart, a sharp jade shard still lies.
The envy that gnaws at my soul day and night
Is as green as your sweet, green eyes.















Comments
ANYWAY, you are amazing and I bow to you! I think you should keep writing because you will probably end up being published. *sigh* I am jelous now. I'm think of trying to write another poem but I need insporation. We'll see!
anywho, don't bow to me!! ahhh i am not that good!!
and don't be jealous
hmm inspiration. yeah that's kind of a big part of it
POETRY FIGHT!!!
jk, partly because that's the weakest battle call ever, but that would still be fun
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"everyone longs for a perfect spring.
inside of us all, we sing,
'sing me a song that rhymes and rings,
and show me a perfect spring.'" - me.
I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, then copy and paste this in your signature.
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wishes are sparkly-- and don't you forget it!
omg how cheesy is that?? sorry. but i'm glad you like it
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"everyone longs for a perfect spring.
inside of us all, we sing,
'sing me a song that rhymes and rings,
and show me a perfect spring.'" - me.
I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, then copy and paste this in your signature.
It's so easy to envision those eyes! They almost haunt you! O_O
and thank you even more for the faves and the watch!! they're my first faves.
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"everyone longs for a perfect spring.
inside of us all, we sing,
'sing me a song that rhymes and rings,
and show me a perfect spring.'" - me.
I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, then copy and paste this in your signature.
Write some more, please
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"everyone longs for a perfect spring.
inside of us all, we sing,
'sing me a song that rhymes and rings,
and show me a perfect spring.'" - me.
I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, then copy and paste this in your signature.
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